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My first entry for a Joy of Text contest.

I'm not too sure about the broken mirror tiles along the bottom - they will be placed a lot further down on the actual shirt than the preview allows.



All comments appreciated - particularly musings on how much bad luck you get for busting a mirror ball.



Oh and a big, massive thank you to Staffel for arranging this contest - Cheers dude

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SEVEN-HUNDRED

My first entry for a Joy of Text contest.
I'm not too sure about the broken mirror tiles along the bottom - they will be placed a lot further down on the actual shirt than the preview allows.

All comments appreciated - particularly musings on how much bad luck you get for busting a mirror ball.

Oh and a big, massive thank you to Staffel for arranging this contest - Cheers dude

benbrignell

Looks great in both colours

The Ending

Great design, Cant believe it looks that good using so few colours. 5

Bramish
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I wouldn't wear it, but it's pretty nicely done. Looks good on the shirt.

bananaphone
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nice work but you shouldnt have the bits of mirrors down the bottom, as far as im concerned its just an unaesthetic distraction.

Petanca

Love the design, not sur about the phrase

adam antium
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me like it.

thomasmccluskey

i love the idea, also not sure about the phrase.
i don't really like the bits at the bottom at all, i'd get rid of them.

nice work though

bortwein
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the word DJ needs a better J, maybe if the top bar of the font extended to the right as well it would have fixed that issue.

lemonalle

Nice job!

cityauctor

i think it's pretty cute. Good job.

Phoenix Rising

Love it. Like it better in the darker color.

Lowfat

i dig this. 5.

sonmi
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sweet! i don't really mind the J, either.

.jl-london.

Js fine, this is great man

itwasa_trick

nice on the darker color... don't have the mirror pieces at the bottom.

alinka

nice. nice.. but waht exactly does the phrase mean?

alinka

oh a DJ.. i thought it said a DO
haha now i get it.

suziiscool

idk if i would really wear it either lol...but it is an awsum design!

Tharlypoo

Lol if i was into clubbing i'd deffinatley buy it, but really good idea, keep the broken bits at the bottom too it makes it alll the more unique

staffell
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nice work!

chelly

get rid of "a dj" and it's a $5

enlighten_the_messenger

I agree with bortwein. I thought it was an incomplete "O" for a few seconds.

Really cute, though.


You guys- getting rid of the DJ part would just ruin the disco ball!

styleboxx

So, I like it.. but everytime I see it I have the hardest time reading the word "DJ".

hforhello

I love this!! Just fix the "J" so that it's clearer.

TAZL

I love the design, not really the message, but maybe re-work it

Pusssykat

That DJ wrecked my life too

insolity

ohh, its a j? makes more sense like that

xiiiin

fix the J!!!

kidderliverpool

I didn't get it at first because I couldn't see that the mirror ball was broken, maybe if it had a crack in it, would be more apparent. Nice idea though.

xiiiin

i was thinking maybe you could fix the J by removing the first square of the serif (upper-left square) and placing it to the right of the stem... maybe? could work

Monkey II
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Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DeadSilence

i thought it said ADD.

Jemae
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Great Idea + nice color combo! 5$! tq =)

BrandonB11

awesome im not sure if id wear it but 5

LittleFlower

The 'J' would read better without the top serif entirely since the other letters have none (not sure about the 'C'). Otherwise, love the concept.

SEVEN-HUNDRED

Hmmm - I totally didn't see there being any problem with the J.

No probs tho - its an easy fix

Cheers for the reactions everyone

kate.rad

This is so cute. I'm a little confused as to why your horizontal sections are straight across when you did the globing on the vertical ones though...
I love it on purple, and I think you have to keep the mirror pieces to show people that its broken, but maybe only do them in a small clump off to one side as opposed to scattered across the entire bottom edge of the shirt.
Clever idea!

jwalsh
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nice one!!

ohyoustealher

I'm with the crowd on the J. Take the top line off and it might be easier to read. I thought you were going for "dog" at first and forgot the g. I'm also a bit slow sometimes, though

ascorbique

I like the mirror bits on the floor.

Prince Nani

this shirt is tight the dark blue one looks the best leave everything how it is.5

britishchapsrock

i do love the purple colors...im on the fence about the phrase tho

___zero

I don't get it. it could be cute, but I don't see the meaning and the text isn't that clear.

gooseyGfunk

reminiscent of Justin Timberlake's new cd insert

OlliRudi
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awesome, but it's a bit distracting that it only seems to be curved horisontally, the vertical axis needs to be curved too

Jahoosawa
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I love the disco ball, not too crazy about the quote though. I would go without the broken tiles, but maybe try puting the reflections around the shirt.

Tabs

I love it, but lose the broken tiles! :)

peacock77

Funny. But get rid of the mirror tiles. No need for them.

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