Dumb rain..

  • by Ueno
  • posted Nov 07, 2006
  • 45 Comments

My first design submitted to threadless. ^^; I know this probably won't be picked, but I just wanted to submit something fun and cute at first. Yes, it's nothing witty or creative. But eh, whatever xD..

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YadGadge

I really like the rabbit, would be better without the skull bubble.

Sweet.and.Snarky

I agree with YadGadge. I like the rabbit, but not so much the sull bubble.

Aeeee

Agreed. I love the big round feet too.

Leslee

No skull bubble. Great style.

runningwithcolours

maybe if the skull bubble was in brown too...the white stands out too much maybe...nice drawing though

Ueno

ah ^__^;; thanks everyone! i thought i might receive really mean comments but i guess not O_O;; (or maybe not yet.)

and ok xD next design i'll try to have more colors and avoid having random ones pop out here and there.

thanks for the feedback!! i appreciate it lots

rissajess

i love it... but i would like to see how it looks with different colors

snazzytmi

I think centered would be better. Vera cute. $5

Looneygirl

That is so cute but would be much better if it had more color in it. Definitely lose the skull bubble!! Right now it's a 3 but if those things are done it would be a definite 5!!!!

gtbuddha

I don't like the bubble either

Some Person

yea. really cute. make the skull brown to mix in, and the entire thing larger in the same placement and its a 5$. until then its just a 5. =D

Ueno

ok, thank you everyone ^^;!! and yeah most people want more colors i realize.. or at least something that doesnt mix in with the shirt color too much.. i'll always keep that in mind from now on.

Anyway, my next submission will be available (hopefully) in 4-6 more days or so ^_^;.. and it has way more colors~ well, more colorful than this one at least..

katolms

Love the illustration, hate the skull bubble, love the rain so I'm not sure if I'd wear it...

Samtricks

it's good, without the bubble :)

ButterflyWings

Why would you think you'd get bad comments? That illustration is wonderful. Without the bubble, it's a definite $5. I can't wait to see more of your work!!

Zay

ya lloking good..but its to dark...not coming out

altricial

i actually really like the bubble!

tigershark

I like it but don't understand the obsession with rain/umbrella designs on this site...

ascorbique

Whithout the bubble please!

Ueno

@butterfly - eh i noticed a lot of designers get eaten alive here :( so im seriously not sure what people would find offensive/stupid/awful or whatever. and yeay! yeah i just submitted something new 2 days ago or so.. im hoping it'll show up soonish!

@tiger - yeah i was thinking someone might comment that @_@ well, as for me, i dont really draw umbrellas and so i thought id give it a try anyways xD; and also, its been raining tons here in vancouver, canada sooo.. yeah i thought might as well~ since i was a bit down when i drew that. :) thank you tho.

and to everyone else : thanks! i'll keep your suggestions/feedback in mind.

Ueno

odd.. the break tags dont work.. sorry if my replies look smooshed.

breeannabanana

Without the skull bubble the emotion of the piece would be ambiguous. Ambiguity is a good thing. I like it as it is, but would love it without the skull bubble.

TheInfamousBaka
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The more I look at this, and less I like the skull bubble. It seems to distract from the actual illustration itself. BUNNY. I'd wear it. :)

mellom

5 without the bubble and with an extra colourdetial - but not too much thoug.

Ueno

waaaaaaah im so sad .. my new sub got declined.. i got confused with the "unique" colors thing. cos here EVERY color is considered unique already. at artschool all shades of red is just red still and thats 1 unique color.... ugh how frustrating..

if anyone wants to check it out its on my blog anyways so you can see it.. but im gonna make another illustration tho... i really really dont want to change the colors.. so meh better to make a new one perhaps :(

and aw thanks guys.. and alright.. this one has hardly any color xD the other one has TOO many colors.. lol.. dies

the_efaf

I find the skull bubble necessary for the emotion in this piece. Of course it makes it a more depressing "emo"ish sort of design but I see so many "cute for the sake of being cute why don't you just AWWWW" over it designs that I don't mind seeing something that tries to skew it a little. Of course darkly cute is already done a lot, I'm just hoping for something a little out of the plain old blah "cute just to be cute" stuff. The skull however, is the only patch of white. Either change the skull color or add white elsewhere in the design. Right now it is very unbalanced with the skull being the only white thing.

PrincessTshirt

I like it except for the brown, the design is fine in one color so long as the shirt is a different color

Without_Socks

Leave it totally as it is btw :)

girlunderground

This is really cute but lose the bubble skull it's totally out of place.

MackenzieC

really good with the skull bubble. i'd buy it if the bunny was bigger.

MackenzieC

without the skull bubble that is.

Recherche

I like your style, but not bunnies. :)

So that means a 3, but I encourage you to keep submitting!

sugarkitten

I love the bunny, the style, the shape and the proportions. I'd like to see this with color added. You are on to a great style.

sugarkitten

Ueno - absolutley keep submitting. Your style is kinda reminisant of Hello Kitty except yours kills Hello Kitty with your awesome-ness.

Ueno

@efaf - well it wasnt meant to be depressing really.. @@ altho, i guess most people would associate it as something depressing or sad.. but it might also be the way i drew the thing altogether.. i wasnt feeling happy when i drew this anyway @@. and yeah i like skewing things a little :P makes it more interesting.
@recherche - oh? what type of animal do you like? i drew a doggie but unfortunately it got declined/rejected cos i got confused with the too much colors thing. some people have like 5 colors and still get accepted so i get seriously confused there. mur. but anyway i should try submitting a new one soon ^^;
i know most of you might like the bunny but i really wouldnt want this one to get printed.. it would be embarassing anyway.. so i'll keep trying submitting better designs/more creative ones at least @_@.

Ueno

@sugarkitten - aw thanks! and lol yeah cos i love the japanese cartoons stuff so.. quiteeee influenced by that ^^; and i also draw anime too.. so.. xD;; but heck i'll also try realism tho since i do that as well :D but.. yeah need ideas ^^;;.. and absolutely! i'll try to keep it submitting. im just kinda stuck on ideas i guess cos having lesser color choices makes things harder for me..

LaLoca

The bunny is really beautiful... I would definitely wear it.

Ueno

oh wow, i thought it'd end tonight or something. i have another submission coming up.. i think i'll be done by tomorrow hopefully ^^;


and thankssssss :) laloca.

hannieo

This is cool.
I like your style much.

Ueno

thank you hannieo. ^^

pooloftears

another cool design~ i personally like the skull there~

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