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Office Romance

  • by kaloyster
  • posted Jun 30, 2006
  • 28 Comments

Looz ze text

Watch this
squintygirl

The font looks really off. I don't think you even need the text here.

theoretical k

Yep, get rid of text. Other than that pretty good. Different color?

davidxc

agreed. no text, different color

mariaeli

Ditch the text, and I'm guessing the Wing Ding's heart is on purpose, but it's not pretty. :(

Dilemma8

looks good.

okayokayFUCK

Yeah, I'm in agreement with the no text, different colour movement.

Schnappi

maybe a pixel heart? no text def

Willish

I think the text is alright if it was in a different colour, maybe just black outline. Leaving the hearts to be bolder.

KMK

I don't like the text.

_nando

yeah, no text and a pixelated heart like schnappi said would be cool

slinkyindieninja

I think it would be better with no text and a pixelated heart too.

December13

Text seems outta place, the rest is good though. only other thing is the shirt color.. offer a few dif colors to see which people like best, cuz I'm not feeling the oramge, though some people do.

sagat

Yeah u hear it hundred of times. Ditch the text and play around with the colours

teenageharlequin

different font..
maybe some pretty cursive?

soundnova.com

i'll chime in with thoughts of no text

PeacemakerSaya

cute idea, devinately no text though...or maybe a thin cursive kind of text, maybe. and also i think it would look better on a yellow shirt. but other then that its adorable

paperandglue

I'm on the no-text train, too.

JDirks

the text might look better in a fancy cursive font, but the original font is way off

i2uthanne

$5 without text. Great concept.

miakala

I love the text... No, actually I just wanted to be the first to say that. I think he gets the idea that no one quite enjoys the text. So shut up. Haha...
Cheers,
-Mikala

standardsoil

i don't think the pixilated heart would make sence. . . fax/coppy machines don't pixilate full page print outs.

Wasiley

Good idea, but the drawing can improve

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