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All this paperwork is killing me

  • by dontan
  • posted May 04, 2006
  • 29 Comments

Death of a writer ??? lol



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elphabasoup

Would adore this if it was drawn in a different style.

cthetiger@mac.com

don't like the tee color but design is nice.

This Confession

i like the design
although i wish it was more detailed and stuff
and more views of it -_-

Ivy_O

this is just fugly! my honesty should be appreciated!

c_case

punxie,
your honesty would be appreciated if only you used words that actually existed.

what are you, three?


anyway, i like this shirt.

hehehe

Yeah, execution, pardon the pun, is not so great, but I love the design! Done in greater detail (cartoon or realistic) this would be great (and have some paper on top of him too). If you are going to re-do this one make the printer (or fax, whatever you want) vicious, with shredded paper coming out like how it appears you have here, I'm just saying don't lose the basic idea.

MiSS_405

$5! its me on the shirt..hahaa!

lucyfarfort

The style looks like that of a Comodore 64 computer game. It could work but not for this image, sorry.

Bodishmosherson

I love the idea (and the style), but the perspective you're trying to pull off is tough on a shirt. It's hard for the viewer to understand that it's a bird's-eye view when he or she is looking at it vertically on a person.

Firimar Elerrino

Style doesn't work well for this, IMO. Clean, smooth lines.

FuRiouS StyLeS

you kids are HARSH!! If you worked in the corporate world you'd appreciate this much much more. Maybe it should read all this HOMEWORK is killing me for these KIDS!

I love it! Great use of diagonal! High 5!!

julesdom

HAHAHAAHH I LOVE THIS ONE SO MUCH!

villainess

nice angle. very cool.

vonstephen

haha i just watched office space,
this reminded me of that

Notor!ousD!no

why god.

why?

the anatomy kind of sucks. both arms should be sprawled.

and why is the paper so blank? if he died, you'd think he did some work

cool idea, poorly excuted.

$2

Ace of Spades

I'm not a big fan of the copy, paste, and rotate thing. An ok style, but not really for this. Maybe make the blood splattered more. Or maybe have some papers sticking through him. I don't know.

seanalton

Wow, I didn't get/see the dead guy laying down until after I read the title to the design, lol. $4.

dontsnatchmavrck

i like the use of space, but in general, i agree that it's a cool idea but poorly executed.

laurosaur

ccase - fugly exists... but i hope not among three year olds.

you would have appreciated it more if punxie said "fucking ugly"? doubt it.

i, personally, think it's cool.

Heffer

Etcha-sketch?

jylcat

love the design (so much), hate the color of the shirt. blue might work better. even tan.

bridgealidget

I don't like the fuzziness of the lines but I like the design. A lot.

WhereItsAt346

it just looks like the guy got murdered in an office...

glassrain

I like the concept, but not the style of drawing...it reminds me of clipart (unless that was intentional?)

buttterflykissez

He died from the biggest paper cut ever!

ivegotnothing

interesting, good concept i think

makes me think of Office Space and their arch nemesis printer thing
maybe tweak it to a take-off on that?
you see the guys beat the crap out of the printer maybe his buddies repay the favor...

not fond of the style
could look really cool in comic book drawing style sans the comic frames

Rob Green

this would be soooo sweet if the illustration was good

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