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We'll make out like bandits!

  • by ivana
  • posted Jan 31, 2006
  • 50 Comments
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bejung

Boonie and clyde… i like it except the gril's arm

4

k-b

LIke alot

LeftoverPenguin

I have to agree about the girl, specifically the arm; she looks pretty old and wrinkled. 4

zerotonin

i like the idea...maybe revise the drawing. shot gun & bandana looks great.
good luck

squeegebeckenheim

the girl's right arm/wrist looks like it is bent at a really unnatural angle. otherwise i really like it.

dangerouspenguin

This made me laugh out loud in the middle of class. $5 for sure.

servicegamer

i've definitely seen that before, the people kissing through the cloth over their faces, i just can't exactly remember where.

bangArang

hey, how do you get a good cartooney look to the pic like that. is it a filter? or what?

stupidostrich

Clever... and I don't mean that in anything approaching a good way.

The Captain of Awesome

This is a good design. I feel the impact would be better as a crimson design on a khaki shirt.

ToucanSam

Aaaahhh! That girl has a hand growing out of her elbow!

Sorry. I really would like this a lot if the bodies were just a little better illustrated.

akaufman

I'll agree with the comments about the girl's arm/hand. there's a bit too much of a hollow in her chest, and I'd like to see her eye tweaked just a bit - she looks angry. The concept is great.

Madlune

eeee :)

jett

hillarious and well drawn -- a winning combination.

BlueManBass

i love the idea, but the details need to be smoothed(namely body parts, like the arm....not to beat a dead horse or anyting, 4$

BlueManBass

....forgot this ---> )

HoOk07

my boyfriend has mono...i want this now! LOL+

Heffer

Less detail $4

rarecords

the girls throat looks like one of those smoker holes

NW Fast

ha.

Ellsswhere
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Sorry man... I agree with everyone, less linework makes for a smoother design. I think you have a print here but it needs to be revised.

Amanda13

awesome.

secretlyironic

This has a lot of potential. But I agree that the arms look awkward.

love the concept though. love.

Staplegun

what is that line at the V of her shirt supposed to represent? It looks really funny. I have to agree with too much line in the drawing, also.

maryd5690

I like it but I don't like the border. I would put it at the bottom of the shirt on a side and with no border.

laurelxcore

ahhh, Play on words...pun...I LOVE IT.

Fix some of the things they said above. :D

3ruce

good one!

UncleOrman

A pox on threadless if they don't print it!

shiv_62390

4$.. i love it

redberger

sepia 5 and buy

ivana

hey, thanks for all the votes, comments, suggestions, sarcasm, etc.

there's a slightly revised version here...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v301/ivanareason/makeoutrev.gif

mostly just the angle of her right arm and a few less lines elsewhere.

it's not perfect but i'm happy with it. i'm sure if there's any other huge problems, twenty or so people will let me know. you guys are the greatest ;)

k8lyn4121

kinda like the pj harvey song...

"like a modern day bonnie & clyde on the run again..."

love_lingers

i like this ... it's a great idea!

and the eye of the girl.. she does look a bit angry... but really.. that's the only thing find wrongish

anyway ivana... have you read Teenagers From Mars? this design totally reminded me of it:
http://www.giganticgraphicnovels.com/teenagers.html

it's a very well done (at least in my opinion) graphic novel... i just love the message it has about the first amendment

love_lingers

oh yeah... 5$... even though it has a gun

ungivenglory

deadly illustration, well executed, girls arm is kinda beefy, 5.

]-[x]-[

The girl's right hand cannot physically be in that position going on the angle of her upper arm.

wired_fractal

i don't like the border, good concept though

PyramidStud

Reminds me of that girl Kate on the show lost

Just1Jean

haha makes me want to laugh for some reason..but yeah I love it

Farren

This is nice

Cerebratious

$5 for cleverness and originality. So there.

necro666

hi. please contact me at mem@o2.pl, i've got a proposal for you concerning this design.

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