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just girls

  • by MissKniks
  • posted Aug 05, 2005
  • 4 Comments

yep, theres room for improvement, so let me know what you think. :-)

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Daniel James Diggle

first, an most obvious is that they look stretched, squashing them down wud be good idea. Also the first girl (pink lips) looks like she has a beard, you only need a single line to define the jaw, its the most offputting thing there. The second girl (red lips) doesnt need that line across her neck, it looks too seperate.get rid of the line, keep the jaw line its fine, and connect the two vertical neck lines to the jaw, or close to it.
I seriously think it bommed because it just looked not quite finnished
Good luck.x

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