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LADY IN RED

her head is smaller then the rest of her body and looks like a mans.

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a_deep_breathe

Yea.. guess you're right. Thought it was pretty good for my first one....

PoopyCakes

its a nice concept and I like it but you need to make her look like a woman. Give her some breasts,change the face, and her arms look kinda manly to me atleast .

mechanical_rain

I like the background design. It does look like a man though.

thejessefactor

If it's any consoltion, I'd hit it.

Good job on your first try. I hope to see more soon.

amandaw

she HAS breasts... just because they aren't DDs... :)

smaller arms and bigger head though. good use of color.

nins45

arms look a little big for rest of the drawing, but I like it otherwise

eileen83

i love how the butterflies are behind her but like everyone has already said, she looks like a man.

good job though!

a_deep_breathe

Yea the more I look at it the more she looks like a dude. Oh well. =)

ND78

Uh...
Flowers in the Attic part II ????

Maybe a different color scheme.

I'm new though, so ...

if you never saw that design, then this is very good and original.

VenomousSwan

Ooooh, oooh. I love the design! I would buy it but grey makes me look dead. sniffles Very cool though! :)

sistervigilante

Just increase the head size, that's all.

Aspiratho

The original image that the body came from was quite feminine, though not voluptuous, and had a head that was proportional to the body. You should have just kept it.

B*Money

Lady=very masculine.

pinkc0re

the colors are lovely

JenLuKula

yeah, the lady is kinda out of proportion and does look a bit masculine. It's a great concept, though, and a great start (being your first submission, right?). Anyway, I suck at drawing people, so it's probably way better than anything I could come up with :p

theperfectdunce

i love it! ... but it's kinda disproportioned :\

bangBANGzzap

who cares if shes out-of-proportion??!


gorgeous.

a_deep_breathe

I thank you all for all the comments i've been recieving. The good ones and the bad!! I've been making a few more shirts.. just waiting to see if they get submitted.

Robert_Huston

I love it.
I DO.

Something might look odd about her face, though.
You get a 5.


**robert-huston

crazuman

Great shirt, i'd buy it!

Knock Out Ned

its okay but reminds me too much of "flowers in the attic",even the same placement.

aizle

Hey,
Everyone's comments seem to be negative. I understand this is constructive crit, but seriously i love it. all good, and if it's your first try them, holy cow.
Keep 'em coming, seriously.
J

quoperate

blood sprayed butterflies. hmm I dunno...

and_wings

I thinks its pretty good for your first try -I really like the red background witht he butterflies (pretty), if you slim down the girl and amke her more feminie I'd totally want this t'shirt

cperky04

it has potential, but I agree with most of the previous comments about her masculinity, and her head looks too small.

CFriend

Flowers In The Attic.
Manly.
Blood.

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sleepy_california

this seems so...
i dont know how to explain it.
i would never wear this..but i know and am good friends with tons who would.

bigger head. a little more boobage. but don't go crazy..it's close.
i like it..i really do. i just think the whole black and white, blood thing is so overdone..even if you didn't mean for the flutterbys to look like blood.
nice job. especially for a first submission. :)

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