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Together Forever

  • by xLeah
  • posted Apr 01, 2005
  • 17 Comments

So, this is my first submission.. tell me what you think! :D

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__mellowbonsai

i think its really cheesy and full of high school wishful thinking

bitt3n

if there were a woman on either side of the guy, that would be amusing

KEMMLER

alex's predicted final score for this entry: 1.62

chimbleysweep

im going to go against you on this one and go lower. about 1.06 or so.

ej ronin

mmmm...the colors conflict way too much...and maybe if you cleaned the edges up a bit....not my style of shirt, but...I give it a 2 for effort and because its better than my first embarassing submission. Keep at it.

Novemberist

anyone could have cut that heart off of the used's cd cover. most people chose not to.

xLeah

Novemberist, I did not cut the heart from the Used's cd cover.

Thanks, everyone, for the comments, though.

slide0ndown

mm that's a bit crappy maybe. sorry, but the idea's not very original and it looks more like she's dying/he's holding her up. and the red clashes horribly.

tictac2

i can understand the concept, but its too tacky - the silhouettes could use more detail and different colours. a fair first effort, tho

amlingisrad

No drips on the heart! And yeah, if there were a girl on either side it'd be hilarious.

MJP550

looks so cheap. Sorry.

Remster

It's not bad at all for a first submission. But I also think it is a bit cheesy though, there's a limited crowd that would wear designs like these and I think most of them don't frequent this site. Just keep at it and keep submitting!

Newbie

Never say Forever! I did once and look at me now , all I have left is this website...


...The 2 chick comment definitely rocks and it is cheesy but cheesy can be good, like Remster says just keep submitting!

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