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yay for elephants!

  • by paul lau
  • posted Feb 23, 2005
  • 36 Comments

this was a project for school that was to take bartalo\\'s style, and to make something similar but my own. i\\'m hoping this is a bit different, and worthy of it\\'s own. if not, i\\'ll be sure to use some more of my own style.

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burntfly

i actually like it. i wish it were bigger, better position, and lose the elephant in the corner

tyz

chink, this is bloodac. five and a buy! just try to make it a taaad bigger. ;]

Erris Hughman

is it just me or does that look like abstract black on white crime?

gothic_girl8

great work paul love the colors

suckITdry

if i where to ride around on an elaphant shooting people i would deffinately want to be wearing this shirt

christinevirgo

I like the design a lot but don't like the colors.

lilbucu

i like it alot. i would only like it better if it made girls love me.

brocked

I think you're cutting it a little close on "similar but your own"

http://www.bartalos.com/pages/print1.html

I love your shirt, and I don't want to bash it - I just think the elephant looks too lifted - everything else is swweeeeet.... don't feel bad, it's obvious Bartalos copped his whole illustration style from Jim Flora (and it's not like he's the only one)

brocked

oh - and yeah, I'd still buy your shirt

volley

love the design,hate the shirt colour

bonjoy

Marvellous dear boy, marvellous. 5

paul lau

quick question? can we modify the shirts if they win? or does it stay this way til the end print?

Robsoul
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you can modify them

for example: the shirt call "thank you" by Christopher Roeleveld in the shop originally use to ... "thank you" on the shirt, which was brilliant. however, it was changed and now says "the future is boring"... not brilliant, pretty f***indumb actually, and then they printed it on heather....

so what's the moral of the story?
changes can be good, but they can also be BBAAADDDD... blah

paul lau

cool, cuz i was thinkin of getting rid of the elephant, like everyone says, and enlarging the image a bit more and lowering it slightly.

paul lau

errr... the elephant on the bottom right corner is the one i'd get rid of.

chippolot

Don't like how the illustration is encased in a rectangle on the shirt... Love the drawing though!

bird75

The elephants have too much of a resemblence to the Lucero Skateboard logo done a few years back. ...and i agree with: Erris Hughman
Kind of looks like racial violence in some weird way.

Clean illustration though. Good Work.

suckITdry

keep the elephant

Snubradew

who i mean whow, i mean really, super 5 hardcore (nonstop)

ribbon

nice, it reminds me a bit of samurai jack for some reason

GivEUp

lol wud, it does remind me of samurai jack

muntkey

I agree with the comments about removing the bottom hefalump, as it isn't working. I'd also prefer the rectangle to be a little less tall. Either way, it's still superb.

(this is bolak, by the way)

thornykins

A little bigger and i'd buy it. nice.

PrettyBulldog

I like it...I'd lose the elephant on the bottom right. I also wish that it wasn't in a square. Something circular for the background (or busting out of the square more) would look better to me.

blackythecat

ELAPHANTS GOO MOOOOOOOOOOOO
Needs bonobos

darkinsanity

haha that's hella awesome XD

travis76
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i don't get it. it'll win.

travis76
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that's a compliment, by the way.

paul lau

doode (travis76), i was totally looking at your drawings, and i was floored! nice colouring!

discojing

i likes the design! the lil' elephants are cute.

IM SO VOTING FOR THIS!
(hrm.. this is jessica, from your dan and jessica bear comic!)

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