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This illustration is really hard to understand. The style is too extreme, the line work is thin and the body proportions are too dynamic.


^ what he said. try something else.


I would stick with the concept because, when executed correctly, it could be pretty cool! I would enlarge the letters a little, you could even make the puddle morph into something ie. the idea manifesting itself into a physical entity. But I would change the illustration style if I were you. I'd bulk him up a bit and give him more definable features. Try to make the brain as normal as possible, because right now it looks like a dish cloth. I hope I helped a bit!


ty, I' ll keep on working with it.

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