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Kid President Need Some Critique!!Ohh Boy

by bigmind / tipstricks /

hey guys!! my second entry here for the kid President challenge :)

http://www.threadless.com/kidpresident/want-to-be-awesome/

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also this is my first time using some halftone effects to give it the free hand drawing feel but wasn't that good :( i think there is nothing like using a tablet or something that use the free motion of the hand .

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Poeha
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I dislike kid president. But still I kinda like this design, so that's good. It's a hard challenge.

Your English is of, I think it should be: but what if there were (only) 2 paths in the world?

But I'm not a native speaker.

bigmind

ohh shit!! i taught he said "but what if that were in world two paths" but after reading your comment i think he didn't!! am i wrong or something about what he said??

You r not a native speaker, me neither English is my third language but anyway if people don't like it, they will have to score it down :(, cause i don't think someone will wear a t-shirt with grammar faults on it, that's stupid hhhh!! anyway thanks for comment :)

Poeha
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I don't know what he said. But it just sounds really off. Maybe the kid president isn't that good in grammar too. :P

bigmind

well i don't know, i just copied what he said and i love kid president!! :P

Dani_Rier

He says, "but what if there were two paths."

bigmind

really!! i think he said the word "world" in his sentence ?? but not sure!! :(

bigmind

i misheard him, he said :" but what if there were in world two paths " and my English is off.

should i send another corrected version or just leave it like that and correct the file source if they choose my design to be printed ??

cutts

I like the image but the text needs to be more integrated. The text needs to flow with the image. Try imagining the letters as "shapes" that are also part of the overall image.

bigmind

thanks cutts, I agree with you, I was in a hurry when I was working on this one so i didn't put good efforts wile drawing it, that's why there is all these mistakes, but next time i will follow your advice :)

taz-pie

You don't have to worry about that stuff. This won't print.

bigmind

hahahahahaha you are definitely right!

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