A Design In Critique. Please Take A Look!

<a href="http://www.threadless.com/profile/483557/ellim/blog/235678/A_design_in_critique_Please_take_a_look">Clickable</a>

I lied.<br /> <br /> <a href="http://www.threadless.com/critique/4783/Adventurer">This is it.</a>

hehe :D<br /> thanks.

I made some improvements. Take a look again :)<br /> <a>Here it is</a>

or not...<br /> perhaps <a href="http://www.threadless.com/critique/4783/Adventurer">here</a>