Please give me tips for my rejected design!!
HI guy and gals, this is my last design, it was rejected with this message:
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So i'm here asking your help!!
Thank you every one.
the idea was some kind of super villain that brings with him the wrong item.
the title is inspired to those mangas in which characters always introduce what they are going to do.
This is the result:
Title: "I'll terminate you with my ... uhm ... Umbrella!!"