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Minimal Food! Does this look like sushi?



Thanks 8)


also, new sushi update:



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Christina.A.art
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I think the second one. I would stretch it and make it longer so it's not just triangle

dnice25
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Cool! No outline looks so clean, I like that one.

EZFL
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I think you can do better with the pizza idea. Maybe make it an isometric drawing with the tasty layers separated.

parallelish
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i wanted to make it a triangle with equal sides to add to the minimalism and not use a circle to represent the pepperoni

dnice25
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hmmm? What if you had like 1-2 areas where the cheese drips just a little? That way you can get the idea of pizza more? Right now i'm starting to see a food pyramid

parallelish
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like this Eric?

parallelish
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idk im trying to keep it as simple as possible

lxromero
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maybe instead of that middle orange line you add a circle so that it reads more like pizza

parallelish
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I wanted to just use bars to keep it simple, but I'll try that

JessiLeigh

Maybe try turning it upside down to get rid of that "Food Pyramid" vibe?

JIMDAHOUSECAT
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try flipping the slice 180 degrees

dnice25
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Better this way

JessiLeigh
dnice25 said:

Better this way

Agreed.

R2P2design
dnice25 said:

Better this way

but also curious about the isometric version. maybe do both

parallelish
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Idk about an isometric version, I want to keep it super simple, because I was thinking of doing a series of these, cheese burger, taco, hotdog...

Bramish
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I think it would look better as a circle with that one triangle seperated. But I like this too.

parallelish
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here's what I got so far for the series:

not sure if the last two fit in as much though since they don't use bars.

thanks for all the input as well everyone 8)

R2P2design

i think the first 3 work best as a series; pizza, hamburger, taco

Wolfgang8885

Yeah the last two dont really fit. But it would be really cool if you can incorporate sushi and a donut in the series because they are awesome. It feels like they need something else though. Something mind blowing to make them more recognizable. I like your idea for the series so far.

parallelish
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yeah i just don't know how i would do a donut with horizontal bars

parallelish
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update bump

opifan64
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It's a nice series, especially seeing them together as a set, so I can see why you'd try to get the donut and sushi to work with the others, but as an individual shirt, outside of the context of the series, I'd be far more likely to actually wear the original sushi design as opposed to the revised one. It's more iconic and it looks cooler and funnier than the other one (imho)

EZFL
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Like the side view of the donuts. I'm thinking you should do a bakers dozen and sub that.

aaronmcdermott

I agree with the other posters, the side donuts are really nice

parallelish
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Thanks guys 8)

@opifan64 yeah I like the 1st sushi I had more too, I haven't decided yet if I want to sub them separately or put them all on one tee, if I sub them separate I'll probably do the 1st sushi.

AnthonyMoore
EZFL said:

Like the side view of the donuts. I'm thinking you should do a bakers dozen and sub that.

Really like that idea!

The side view donuts are great.

Wolfgang8885

Donuts are good. Sushi, first one was better. Maybe you can do the sushi cut in half so you can see the inside showing the white (rice) orange (crab meat) light green(cucumber) and the outer seaweed edge.

parallelish
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That could work, I would just use vertical bars, I'll try it out. Thanks 8)

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new sushi bump

Wolfgang8885

If youre going to use curves you might as well do the sushi how you first designed it. To me that doesnt quite look like sushi. What if you leveled off the top as well so its a rectangle?

parallelish
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Yeah I'll probably sub the 1st sushi, but maybe the 2nd to keep the series more consistent... Idk

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