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i created this last weekend but i am not sure if it's good - any advice?
Im not really reading ocean from the lines so the ship seems a little, obtrusive and out of place
i think you have too many lines in the water... have it be more subtle that there's a skull there...
also it's very flat, i think that's because you have it all outlined by that circle
ok - thanks :-)
maybe have the lines fade and taper out a bit more instead of ending in a neat circle
I think it would be cool like this.
is it suppossed to be the view from a sailor's telescope?
I think you should make the circle more like a moon,and the ship sailing across the horizon with a reflection of the moon and ship on the water.
thanks a lot friends.
i guess i loose the circle and try to integrate it more into the shirt background.
i also will put the bones under the skull. i guess that would work better on the tee.
At the moment, the ship looks a bit like an afterthought, like it's just been tacked on.
Maybe the ship can be more integrated into the skull like where the teeth would be?
sure - i guess i have to start again with this.