some advice please ...


hi folks,


i created this last weekend but i am not sure if it's good - any advice?


thanks ….

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lxromero
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Im not really reading ocean from the lines so the ship seems a little, obtrusive and out of place

Ryder
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i think you have too many lines in the water... have it be more subtle that there's a skull there...

Ryder
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also it's very flat, i think that's because you have it all outlined by that circle

lxromero
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maybe have the lines fade and taper out a bit more instead of ending in a neat circle

Wolfgang8885

I think you should make the circle more like a moon,and the ship sailing across the horizon with a reflection of the moon and ship on the water.

badbasilisk
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thanks a lot friends. i guess i loose the circle and try to integrate it more into the shirt background.

melmike
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At the moment, the ship looks a bit like an afterthought, like it's just been tacked on.

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