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Concepts yes or no? Hmmming bird done?


This is the new sketch but I'm worrying the hand doesn't look right.



Any of these worth working on?



  1. Stork delivers food baby to expecting couple

  2. rabbit imitates tortoise with green backpack

  3. Hmmmming bird

  4. Glue fed up with things being stuck to him


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BlancaJP
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2 and 3 for me.

I like the classic tortoise and hair idea, with a little more like they are about to race and the back bag could look like the tortoise shell.

humming bird is funny - bigger thinking face :)

macdoodle
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HAHAHA @ food baby!

britaly

I think they all could work well. #1 made me laugh though.

Pyne
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4 is my favorite!

nerrik

I'm loving 1. Though I feel she should be bigger like she's expecting but it's really because of the food.

JoshReilly

2 and 3 seem to me to have the most potential.

Fungusamungus

Hmmmming bird looks pretty hilarious

soloyo
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4 cause its true

Jake Friedman

All of these are very funny! I think 1 and 2 are the strongest. Strangely enough I have a doodle of number 4 I made a while ago. Great minds think alike.

Ranter

3 and 4 are my favorite! Love them... 1 I don't really get so much

ThePaperCrane
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Humming bird for me. Maybe another bird next to it with its fingers in its ears looking annoyed. (Oh wait, birds don't have fingers. Oh wait, birds don't have ears).

melmike
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Humming bird, maybe with the tip of his wing under his chin like he's thinking hard?

macdoodle
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melmike said:

Humming bird, maybe with the tip of his wing under his chin like he's thinking hard?

Lol! Yes!

Robo Rat
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These designs are so great that these will win the collaboration challenge by itself. And each design will get printed for sure!

Sarcasticatbest

1 and 4 are my favourites, but all have potential

Ephyeah

Love 1 and 4! :D

weirdofared

Really like number 4! :D

taz-pie
Akaka said:

hhhmmmming bird definitely

randyotter3000
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wow so much feedback you guys are awesome, thanks!

So far its

  1. 9 votes
  2. 6 votes
  3. 13 votes
  4. 11 votes

Looks like I will go with 3 and 4 for now, thanks again everyone!

PeculiarTiffany
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papaomaangas said:
melmike said:

Humming bird, maybe with the tip of his wing under his chin like he's thinking hard?

Yes!

randyotter3000
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5eth said:

1 & 3 for me.

Also, the sketches without pupils are scary.

heh yeah it's a bit weird, I do it because I like to decide the expression and where they are looking in photoshop

heykimby

You're right, the handwing does look funny, but I really like this concept. I think it's going to be pretty hard to convey since birds don't have hands, but having a bent "elbow" might help it to read better?

Have you looked at "hand chin thoughtful" on google images to see if you can morph one of those poses into bird form?

randyotter3000
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I just had a fit of rage and deleted the file I was working on this image, going to try a different angle. I think the google image search is a good idea I will use that and get back here with another sketch.

melmike
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I'd actually bend the wing in the foreground up and lose the new one. Guess it doesn't really need to be like a hand as long as you can nail the gesture. Just my two cents. But I definitely think you should work it out coz I reckon this one could be a real winner.

dudeowl
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hehe.

waynem
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Ah, the good old fit of rage, we've all been there before. I can picture it with the front wing folded across it's chest, and since it doesn't have much of a chin maybe put the other wing under the beak. Look forward to the next sketch.

waynem
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Oh, new one went up while i was still writing. Sorry, I think the original was better. The new one looks kind of like it's making a throat slitting gesture.

ThePaperCrane
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Sorry but when you said humming I thought you meant like humming a tune (hence my annoying another bird idea above). Not sure I connect with the direction this is going in as I see this as a um more then a hmmmm but it could just be me.

PeculiarTiffany
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Mantichore said:

I think the hand should look more like this

This!

randyotter3000
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TheInfamousBaka said:
Mantichore said:

I think the hand should look more like this

This!

I love Threadless because people do the hard work for you, Hooray! (thanks dude)

jeffreyg
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i think this is a bit of a stretch. cute illo but i don't think it's too strong

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