"Marty And Jason´s Dream"...Yes, I need a critique xD

Hi everyone :D I did this design and I need your help. I realy love the music that cacophony did in the 80´s so, I wanted to do a tribute to Marty Friedman and Jason Becker. I´m looking for feedback; please, tell me ((honestly)) what you think about my design and, obviously, if you like it in a t-shirt :P. All your critiques are welcomed. Thanks :D.

P.S: I did this by traditional way; I used markers and watercolours.

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Ru Chery

i think that it's cool that you want to pay tribute to Marty Friedman and Jason Becker. I really like the texture of your design with the watercolor and marker look. Nicely done! The design is cool but it still feels like it's missing something. Maybe try adding a few more colors in the mix or maybe a background? I hope I was able to help. Overall great work and I can't wait to see what your next design version is going to look like.

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