New Design- Need productive criticism

Need feedback on this design. I think the glitch effect will be too colorful for Threadless' printing machines. What do you guys think of the design? need productive criticism.


"Glitch Melon"


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GAZPACHO

I don't get the concept. What does a glitch have to do with a melon? Also the melon is really rough. If you look at the back, there are some spots where it isn't properly cropped. Also, the glitch effect doesn't really look appealing. If I where you I would move on.

JumpPuppy

Yeah, I'm not sure about this. I'm thinking if the melon had a glitch, it'll have spots instead of stripes or something like that.

jumbogiant21

maybe instead of a glitch you can phase it to 8 bit it would be more appealing that way and less confusing

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