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My first submission, critiques welcome, will score yours too

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drawntodeath

Thanks, scored yours too. Also cute :)

drawntodeath

Thanks, scored yours, nice design :)

moZeni

adorable toast xD scored

Evan_Luza
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I dig the gradient on the toaster. Just for future - it might be worth trying to explore hand lettered text instead of using a type font, it might have a better aesthetic, just my 2 cents! Voted and commented

drawntodeath

Thank you, scored all 4 above me :)

_EffinSweet_
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hahaha!! funny stuff. One thing i would suggest is checking out some of the other cute submissions that have been printed. I have seen that the gradients done really work here. Try adding some depth and detail to the design, and it will be a definite improvement. off to score it, good luck with future designs

_EffinSweet_
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Here is a LINK to the sore where you will find some of what i am talking about

Davelong88

Great line, I think that a more personal touch to the lettering and speech bubbles would certainly bring it to life. Real nice.

Musarter
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_EffinSweet_ said:

hahaha!! funny stuff. One thing i would suggest is checking out some of the other cute submissions that have been printed. I have seen that the gradients done really work here. Try adding some depth and detail to the design, and it will be a definite improvement. off to score it, good luck with future designs

The concept is good but I agree with Mr. Eff-Sweet here. I look forward to seeing more work in the future.

pedro4

Nice concept! try change their position slightly and add perspective so everything does not look too much in a straight line. The shape of things are too basic in my opinion ... try to start the new version on paper, scan the drawing and then use your preferred app to finish your work.

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