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Which version do you prefer? SCORING

I can't decide which one is better, so i'm asking here:


1)




2)




3)

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NDTank
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I like 3 but it's close

BeanePod
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3 if it said go out have fun

Wharton
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I like 1,2 and 3 but 1 I like most.

Musarter
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I like one best but Perry's suggestion would be another good choice.

goliath72
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3!

The Paper Crane
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Would it look better if you reduced the weight of the inner board edge? I know it is all done in the same stroke weight but...?

Anyway, 1 or what perry said

johnnysPeter

Yeah#3 style with go out have fun

NDTank
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BeanePod said:

3 if it said go out have fun

Momech

1!

FoodStampDavis
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I'm gonna be a trouble maker and say I'd like 3 if it only said "be cool."

micheleficeli

Thanks for the response so far people. Definitely trying some suggestions.

So far we have (if i know math):

1- 5 2- 3- 7+2

micheleficeli

S here's version 4 with some of the suggestions. Any better?

gebe
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per me la prima versione resta la migliore

gebe
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aggiungo subito il tuo nome nella mia lista unprinted top

micheleficeli

Oh grazie :) Adesso sono un po' indeciso su quale scegliere, anche a me la prima non dispiace...

gebe
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Il mio parere è che lo skateboard posto verticalmente si sposa alla grande con il testo regolare, senza contare che tutto l'insieme ci guadagna in pulizia ed equilibrio. Il testo corsivo è troppo spesso e disturba la composizione in questo caso :) ma è solo la mia opinione :)

gebe
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tra la 2 e la 3 preferisco la 2 ad ogni modo :)

gebe
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altra idea che mi balena in testa: hai provato a mantenere in testo corsivo e inclinare lo skate affinché segua l'andamento del testo? :)

gasponce
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I like 1 best!

micheleficeli

So i followed gebe's idea of rotating the board to match the cursive type (grazie gebe :). Also went with a different color scheme. What do you think?

parallelish
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Looks good 8)

Daviisilva

Loving the process Michele!!

The Paper Crane
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Oh yes!! orange and brown, my favorite combo. Will buy!

micheleficeli

Thanks people! Then i think i'm going with this latest version, maybe with some little final tweaks.

micheleficeli

Subbed this for the summer challenge. Let see what happens.

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