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ThePaperCrane
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This is fascinating and very nicely done guys!

How can you not have seen the moon - that's F'd up!

Couple of things: Is a falling coconut not a natural cause then? We call then sheep dogs over 'ere and not herd dogs (is that a US or Scotish thing)? I appreciate the challenge of wording this paragraph. You could say '...and help round up the flock'. to avoid repeating herd and dog to many times.

_EffinSweet_
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Those are some good concerns. We could change the coconut fact to say "from any other cause"?

And i think your suggestion is really good. (now that you say it i also know it as a sheep dog, think that is something we overlooked)

We appreciate the help!

_EffinSweet_
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haha! wat iz a spoelchack

Gamma-Ray
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Thanks guys. @ The Paper Crane.Thanks for the feedback. I also saw that herd being repeated looked odd. Sheep dog is an actual breed of a small dog, almost looks like a poodle, haha. Flock would work well at the end of the sentence.

ThePaperCrane
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:) Seriously though, make sure you do get some1 who is good at de ol' english to proof read it. It still kills me every time they reprint 'Field Study 01' with about 3 spelling errors on it :(===

_EffinSweet_
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We are busy spell checking now. and making the changes. Thanks Rick And sorry about field study, tbh i cant see the errors.

_EffinSweet_
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Can someone please read through and look for spelling errors. We think we got them all

_EffinSweet_
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Yep its from that meme, great little idea of Grants to add the facepalm into it haha

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