Appreciate suggestion and feedback
Hey everyone!! It is I, jumppuppyjumpf44afa24sa7da8sgr7758. I have finally seen the error of my atrocious username and have returned, humble and contrite with a name far easier to read. XD To work then, my good sirs and ladies. Care to spare a thought or a suggestion or two on what else I can do to improve on this piece? This one is totally inspired by Jennifer Lawrence and Emma Thompson's latest rash of jumping into someone else's photo-op. I immediately thought; Eclipse!! My previous two designs didn't fare so well so I'd like to give this one a fair shot. Love you all lots.