Bartnana - Scoring

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JumpPuppy

hahaha... Nooooooooooo!!! not that name again. Ok, will add in earth just to see what it looks like. I'm getting the feeling it might look a little crowded but let's see.

thompson98

I would limit the stars. They don't need to be all over the shirt. I like the idea, I just think it needs a bit more work. Good luck!

JumpPuppy

Limit the stars, check. But how else can this be improved?

thompson98

I dont think the text bubble is working. I think it can work without it. I would also work on the shading of the moon. I definitely believe that there is something here

Milan_
hedraline said:

....maybe lose the balloon but keep the text. actually, looks pretty much good to go.

This and it looks prettycute!

Good luck jumppuppyjumpf44afa24sa7da8sgr7758 or can i call you f44afa24sa7d for short? :D

JumpPuppy
Milan B said:
hedraline said:

....maybe lose the balloon but keep the text. actually, looks pretty much good to go.

This and it looks prettycute!

Good luck jumppuppyjumpf44afa24sa7da8sgr7758 or can i call you f44afa24sa7d for short? :D

Haha... I prefer 4sa7d :P That's a little shorter.

JumpPuppy

Thanks!!!! :) Submitting this very second.

JumpPuppy

Boop! Sure would appreciate comments on this. Been slaving on this the whole day long.

JumpPuppy

Cough cough...

JumpPuppy

Paging @lxromero is this idea permitted? Appreciate the advice.

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