Bartnana - Scoring

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papaomaangas
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Looks like it is ready for submission. But my suggestion is to add Earth, taking the photo. Good luck jumppuppyjumpf44afa24sa7da8sgr7758!

JumpPuppy

hahaha... Nooooooooooo!!! not that name again. Ok, will add in earth just to see what it looks like. I'm getting the feeling it might look a little crowded but let's see.

thompson98

I would limit the stars. They don't need to be all over the shirt. I like the idea, I just think it needs a bit more work. Good luck!

JumpPuppy

Limit the stars, check. But how else can this be improved?

thompson98

I dont think the text bubble is working. I think it can work without it. I would also work on the shading of the moon. I definitely believe that there is something here

Milan_
hedraline said:

....maybe lose the balloon but keep the text. actually, looks pretty much good to go.

This and it looks prettycute!

Good luck jumppuppyjumpf44afa24sa7da8sgr7758 or can i call you f44afa24sa7d for short? :D

JumpPuppy
Milan B said:
hedraline said:

....maybe lose the balloon but keep the text. actually, looks pretty much good to go.

This and it looks prettycute!

Good luck jumppuppyjumpf44afa24sa7da8sgr7758 or can i call you f44afa24sa7d for short? :D

Haha... I prefer 4sa7d :P That's a little shorter.

JumpPuppy

Thanks!!!! :) Submitting this very second.

JumpPuppy

Boop! Sure would appreciate comments on this. Been slaving on this the whole day long.

JumpPuppy

Cough cough...

JumpPuppy

Paging @lxromero is this idea permitted? Appreciate the advice.

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