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Thanks for the feedback!
Fixed the image...
Kind of hard to read.
GAZPACHO said:Kind of hard to read.
I agree, I'm going to redo the text, space it out a bit but keep the style.
Looks good so far.
Any other advice?
I'll have an update version later today... any other ideas?
this is looking awesome, I do agree its hard to read a bit so can't wait to see update.
It is hard to read :( but great!!
Clever. Other than making the text easier to read, I'm not sure I would suggest much else. Are you sold on a black shirt; are you considering any other colors?
Currently...I'm thinking cream actually.
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Type Tee/Slogan Blog
Still too hard to read?
Your latest version is looking better. I think you should't worry about the type/ fuse being entirely faithful to what a real fuse would do/ look like and be more playful with it. I can see you have painstakingly done this, but I would do it again and this time I would
a) make the line weight of the fuse lighter when its not a word or if the line is going behind or across letters. This will give the type a dynamic between what should be read and what shouldn't, making it more legible (in theory anyway)
b) the 'C' in create looks wrong, to me it should loop across the curve of the 'c' and up into the shape and form it this way.
c) I wouldn't capitalise every word.
d) the 'a' isn't clear and is only recognisable as an 'a' in context with the rest of the sentence.
If you do decide to make the fuse more realistic here is a great illustrator tutorial I've used before to get a 'rope' effect.
Nice one Jimmy
Thanks ...we'll see what I can do...that rope bit is very interesting.
Still working on the other version but alternatively...
I like it. Anyone else?
dude....love how this turned out. that last version is so much better!
I agree the one subbed best version
turned out great!
Thanks so much for doing it so happy with how it came out.
I think it's a good start just needs a little more going on.
HERE COMES THE BOOM!