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Critique help please

I have been working this idea for a little while now and i think i've got it. What do you think about shirt placement/ text/ illustration


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jtri

I really like the concept. Maybe you could pick up a little more on the engraved style we're used to seeing on money. I like both placements.

gasponce

funny but it looks like pizza!

kristerpelly
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I absolutely love this concept but I think it needs more visual interest. Maybe thicken up the lines a bit and try that engraved style mentioned above! I think adding hatched lines will fill it in a bit more and leave it looking less empty, because as is it seems a little weak with just line work! But awesome stuff dude!

lxromero
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kristerpelly said:

I absolutely love this concept but I think it needs more visual interest. Maybe thicken up the lines a bit and try that engraved style mentioned above! I think adding hatched lines will fill it in a bit more and leave it looking less empty, because as is it seems a little weak with just line work! But awesome stuff dude!

agreed, keep building on it. I definitely prefer the linework over your previous color options

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