My design was rejected. Any thoughts?

Hi there. I'm Feroz from Malaysia and I'm a first timer here.

My design for photography 2 was rejected because the staff thought my design could use a little more work. Some notes were to integrate the design better into the t-shirt as the 'boxy' look doesn't contribute to the aesthetic of the t-shirt canvas.

Any thoughts or suggestions?

Thank you for your time.

Here's my design:

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