Constructive Criticism please

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In a previous thread, suggestions were to have it be more cohesive and to not have it cut off.
I think it looks really weird with legs though... I was thinking about putting teabags where the original version cuts at his waist, but it looked kinda random. I like the composition of the original though. I think the legs are a little too much. What do you guys think? Any suggestions would be great!

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You can clearly see that this is done in illustrator. In my opinion this design is not suited to be executed in this program. It looks to static almost like a wooden doll. Maybe you can get some inspiration with this link (just an example you don't have to do it this way) -->,guys/style,shirt As you can see it looks more natural, of course it's done in a different style. All I want to say is that you maybe have to think about a different approach to workout this design unless your an illustrator program god. It's just a suggestion to help you working out this design because I think that this is a good design if well executed.


What program do you suggest? I don't really want it to be realistic, but I don't want it to look like a wooden doll lol In regards to Astronaut Sloth, Isn't that a photomanipulation? Maybe I'll try rendering it in a different way. Thanks for the suggestion :)


it don't have to be realistic, the link was just an example. With another program I mean photoshop. You can also try to drop the illustration you made in illustrator in photoshop and use texture and filters.


I can't say I know what this is a reference to, but its certainly an entertaining idea. I think you could take the top hat and monocle idea further and have a table with a white tablecloth and a saucer in front of him (just the front of the table). You could have his other hand holding a saucer (). Plus, it would fix the legs/teabags dilemma. :) Anyway, just my take on it! Cool design!


It's not in reference to anything, but I'm glad you find it entertaining! I was about to give up on this, but maybe I will take it further and just go crazy with it haha. Thanks for your input :)

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