Take this basic idea and run with it!
So, what would you do to make this better, or more you?
Take my idea and run with it!
(I tried to get feedback in another thread, if someone would like to tell me where threads for newbie feedback usually get posted - or if the idea is a total dead end and to stop annoying people with these questions, then please tell me!!!)
Would you make it cuter? Make it reflect the song lyrics more? Change the artistic style? Scrap it and start again?