New design, would like suggestions/comments!

New design for the alternate history challenge. I know that it isn't very good quality and I'm looking for any suggestions on how to make it better. Maybe something I could add or something I could change. Positive and negative feedback welcome.

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Hi, I think I understand your concept - a knight serving at a drive through?

It feels like a bit of a mishmash of styles. You've got some gradients in the mask, scribble on the clothes for texture and then photo textures on the bricks & tiles. To start, I'd get rid of those photo textures, if for no other reason than I imagine it that such tiny details would not be able to be printed well.

Secondly, everything other than the man has a very straight-line ruler feel to it. A little roughness would help.

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