What do you guys think?

Something I made real quick last night c:
Need opinions on what else to add or change c:

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chuckpcomics
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You defiantly have talent, I don't think I can critique this because it's not my style but I know people will love this

MilkyKao

Good start but it looks king of messy. If you can simplify it a bit, it would look a lot better.

richard.muller.370

I would say get rid of the magenta hair at the bottom and you've got a design!

richard.muller.370

Oh and maybe work on having a darker background to give it some contrast. And neon print colors. It would be a cool twist.

MarkMorbidity

Well this is just a sketch c: i am doing linework on it c: then adding color. This isnt a finished piece just a rough draft c:

btw the magenta isnt hair lol it's blood.. the diff colors are diff layers. It's a way of me knowing what is what without getting confused..So imagine if i did the sketch with one color.. it would be more confusing than what it is now :P

richard.muller.370 said:

Oh and maybe work on having a darker background to give it some contrast. And neon print colors. It would be a cool twist.

MarkMorbidity

It's just a sketch c: i am already working on the linework C: will post progress soon c: I kinda suck at line work :C

MilkyKao said:

Good start but it looks king of messy. If you can simplify it a bit, it would look a lot better.

MarkMorbidity

Thank you C: means alot chuck!! :D Working on the line work which i am a bit bad at D: and this is my 1st time doing something sorta like this c: my inspiration for this type of stuff is from the artist dan mumford c:

chuck p comics said:

You defiantly have talent, I don't think I can critique this because it's not my style but I know people will love this

Morkki
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Looks like a good start but check out some guides for human face proportions to get them right! To me her mouth looks a little low as usually the distance between the nose and the upper lip is a lot shorter than the distance between the lower lip and the tip of the chin.

MarkMorbidity

I am working on proportions and it's something i have a tough time with. But i will get better in time :D Thanks for the comment c:

Morkki said:

Looks like a good start but check out some guides for human face proportions to get them right! To me her mouth looks a little low as usually the distance between the nose and the upper lip is a lot shorter than the distance between the lower lip and the tip of the chin.

_EffinSweet_
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Finish it!!!! looks great so far!

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