Submissions and ideas 2014 - Magic Happens

I'm going to try one of these keeping track of all my ideas in one blog thing.


Feel free to comment on any of them, they are all in different stages, some
more rough then others.


Magic Happens - Scoring



12 Dogs of christmas - 3.04



Upsidedown Frown - 3.31



Hiss n Purrs - 3.19



Jazz Hands - 2.70



Honey Pots - 2.91 Collab with EZFL



I Can Haz Hart Attak - 3.14



I Can Haz - 3.12



Mr. Sunburn - 3.15


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soloyo
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Spider? how about a centipede ?

ThePaperCrane
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All great fun and future 5s Looking forward to seeing them worked up.

Only neg crit is I'm not keen on the T colour of the lunar eclipse one.

soloyo
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chuck p comics said:

these are all great, centipede is so good!!!!!!!!

Looks great, not sure if the clerk should be crying. maybe more like this:

soloyo
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I like the text better, if you put a shoe in a bubble you can't tell if he is getting new shoes, different shoes or different color.

soloyo
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What if the store had a "buy one get the other free" offer sign?

ibyes
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I made some progress on the Centipede shoe design. It's still rough, but it is coming along. I plan to mess around with other T colors and color in general.

vectoredlife
ibyes said:

I made some progress on the Centipede shoe design. It's still rough, but it is coming along. I plan to mess around with other T colors and color in general.

My only suggestion is change the shoe picture in the word bubble to just the word. Other than that, I love this design!

ScribblerCreative

I agree that i think the word 'Black' is better than an image of a shoe.

Kudos on the consistency of these designs, they're all winning ideas.

waynem
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Yeah I second that, I think the shoe image draws too much attention to itself, the word 'black' would be better.

ibyes
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I'm getting really close. I have to fine tune the shoe boxes/shadows. Maybe a subtle background. Does it feel like the design is floating?

vectoredlife

I don't think it appears to be floating. Still loving it!

ibyes
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Two new comps posted. The light source is a bit all over the place, but besides that I think I am liking the top one. The difference between the top two is that I replaced the white with a cream in the top version.

soloyo
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YES the top one is my fav.

vectoredlife

Definitely the top! Nice seeing the progress and idea development too.

nerrik

You've clearly put a lot of work into this. Good luck! You have a 5 from me.

Wharton
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Hey Ian, this is looking good. I really like the texture and the shading on this. I don't really have anything else to add. The top one is looking awesome.

ibyes
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Posted a new color version up top. I wasn't loving the green anymore. Plus the texture felt sloppy to me. Do you guys like the top version too?

ibyes
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It's for the kids challenge. Thanks, but I think I am going with the top one. Either that or I will keep trying different things, color has been hard for me on this design.

ibyes
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Done?

Also I'm usually good with titles, but I need some help on this one. Anyone got a clever title.

I have been going with Centi-Pain, but I don't like it.

soloyo
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Too many choices, all in a day's work,

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