WIP - would like feedback and suggestions (updated 29/09)
I had this idea in my head for quite some time and only recently got to sketching it out. The idea behind it was that I wanted to show how ravens are in some cultures described as being "bringers of death", hence why I decided to include a skull, and black eyes and lips. I'll also be adding some "tears" later on. So what do guys think? Are there other elements I could add?
EDIT: Got rid of the skull and made considerable progress on the overall piece. I'm going to try to make the eyes the center-point of the comp, and experiment with colours and whatnot. The message is still there, but not as "deathly" looking, more "ghostly" or "ethereal".