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PAPER MÂCHÉTE - 3.31, Not too bad

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Ryder
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i need to make that "bloodline" look better, no pun intended

Ryder
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huh?? i don't get the apron thing :)

Christina.A.art

It looks like it could be a shark at the tip with its mouth open

Ryder
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HA! i totally see the shark...

Morkki
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You could also just put a blood stain on the edge. Because paper cuts are nasty!

Thomas Orrow
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I think a photo of a paper mache machete/man holding a machete would see the idea of the title better.

Or, alternatively just call this Paper Cut and make a blob of blood instead of just the line.

Ryder
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Ryder
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something like that?

Morkki
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Yeah, like that. I like how the blood stain spreads to the shirt in a darker red.

Ryder
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Yeah I kind of dig it

Christina.A.art
Morkki said:

Yeah, like that. I like how the blood stain spreads to the shirt in a darker red.

This looking great!

Ryder
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Thanks

snoopy1973

for some reason the red line going down all the way doesn't add to the design, I can see what you're trying to do with the "margin" but maybe make it fade or "dirty" it a bit.

Ryder
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Hmm, maybe

goliath72
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1 design submitted -

Haha this is great!!

Christina.A.art

I like the red line going down it's what makes it look more like paper.

Ryder
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submitted! thanks for all your help folks

ChrisDB

That's a win!

kazualtee

looks good and funny play on words!

Ryder
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thanks guys

Underdawg
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Idea is great. Only thing that seems a bit off is the blood.

Is the paper machete being held up? (where the blood would be dripping) or Is the paper machete on the ground? (where the blood would be pooling)

Making either more obvious would be a nice touch.

Good work!

Ryder
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i'd guess it's on some sort of surface... unless a ghost is holding it up.. .or ghost dad...

Ryder
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it's scoring now!

BeanePod
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3 designs submitted - Score now!

Ghost Dad Is Punches

sidepull

This is an easy 5. Nicely done.

Ryder
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3.31

296 score 69 fives 35 ones

caspertheghost

Haha 69... I'm one of the those fives... anyways I digress as usual... Congratulations on the good score and good luck.

goliath72
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1 design submitted -

Great score

JaymeArt

Coool score :] ...I hate paper cuts.

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