Need comments on a rejected design
I submitted this design for the Big Tee but it was rejected. Explanation: it needs more work. Could you help me figure out what's wrong with this, because I don't see how I could make it different and keep the simplicity.
The concept behind was to take a classic T-shirt icon and bring it to "today's taste" by making it even more classic (8bit treatment). Title was W.O.L.F. When Old Leads Fashion.
Thanks for your help.