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Need some critiques / tips for a project

i'm working on a new design, the most has been done but i want to hear your impressions / tips / critiques in manner to improve my work!


thanks for the answers! :)


here's the work


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kzjl
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Maybe try to put the galaxy around the pencil then make the text more on erased style font since the pencil's butt making the text, your concept is good. =)

Frasq
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thanks kzjl! :)

Manupix
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Looks somewhat static, maybe because the drippings are perpendicular to the rocket. Also lose the text, or at the very least draw it! No font!

thepapercut

So far it's a solid design, but there are a few things I would change. The black fins on the rocket I would change to yellow. also I'd streak the erased section backwards to give a sense of motion (manupix pointed this out as well).

Best of luck, and keep on the design!

Frasq
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thanks guys! :)

i'll work to improve the dynamic sensation!

chuck p comics
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the galaxy should be behind the pencil not the eraser, also work on the font, but really good design

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