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Looking for some critique on first submission.

Well, hello! I'm new here =)


So... the title says it all. The idea is called "Children of the Atom".
Here it is in black and purple.


In black:



In purple:



So, what do you think?

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Perro Estepario

Oops, my bad, sorry about that. You should be able to see them now.

Chemil5000

Hey i'm new around here too. :D I think the atom itself is pretty cool but work on the embryo image. Maybe use pics as a guide.

Chemil5000

Also try to keep the clean slick style from your atom to the embryo too.

melmike
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I didn't even see the embryo until it was mentioned. Plus, I'd make it cute, not gross, embryos are not typically what people want to wear on their chests.

Elma e Francis
melmike said:

I didn't even see the embryo until it was mentioned. Plus, I'd make it cute, not gross, embryos are not typically what people want to wear on their chests.

this. I saw an alien there

Perro Estepario

Thank you all for your comments so far. I will get back to work on it.

taz-pie

embryos are gross, man.

colejamo

I like how you have made the embryo subtle. The other comments on the style are on the money though. Maybe less detail and more of a silhouette would do the job? I think it's a good first design.

cjudd

Hey! I used to be an embryo!! and i was a sexy hot embryo.

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