The nacho word pun doesn't really work, sorry. That, and i'm not sure if fondue and nachos go together, could be wrong on that though.
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The nacho word pun doesn't really work, sorry. That, and i'm not sure if fondue and nachos go together, could be wrong on that though.
All cheesy puns aside. The image itself could be worked on some. Making cleaner lines as well as using the space of the design (maybe by giving the nacho and cheese bowl shadows?) also the nacho's stance is a little awkward. A good way to remedy his would be to turn the nacho so that the longest side is facing the bottom. Also a better pun would be "Well, I'm fondue you!" Hope that helps
All cheesy puns aside. The image itself could be worked on some. Making cleaner lines as well as using the space of the design (maybe by giving the nacho and cheese bowl shadows?) also the nacho's stance is a little awkward. A good way to remedy his would be to turn the nacho so that the longest side is facing the bottom. Also a better pun would be "Well, I'm fondue you!" Hope that helps
yeah, i agree with the image needing some work. i think the cheese 'highlights' could use a narrower stroke, and the highlight on the chip could be moved toward the bottom, at the 'bulge' of the drip. maybe? more texture on the chip, too?
yeah, i agree with the image needing some work. i think the cheese 'highlights' could use a narrower stroke, and the highlight on the chip could be moved toward the bottom, at the 'bulge' of the drip. maybe? more texture on the chip, too?
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