Futures Submissions / Feedback Help

New idea. What do you think? I Submit or i have to improve the design.

"Relax Your Mind"

Let go away in your mind, think in the peace of nature and relax.

Watch this

hello the scene coming out of his head appears to have alot goin on and not relaxing ... my opinion i would simplify maybe some doves


delete from the scene some doves?


I'd lose some of the mountains, lose the spaceship, maybe lose a cloud or two, have fewer doves (and only use the best ones), and put the sun behind all of it (maybe sizing it in a way where it would look kind of like the top of the head?). Then I'd clean up my outlines, unless you're intentionally going for sketchy... then I'd sketchy them up more. Good luck!

No account?
Join Us