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NEON RAIN ---- $5 and critiques are wanted :P:P:P

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blackhand_
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I like the colors of version 3 the best. Nice work.

littlem

i like version 1 and 3 the best.

but on version one, i'd love if her dress was the same color as the tee.

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Thanks Kuro ~ :D

littlem

also on version 1, i wonder how it would look if the umbrella was that really pale blue color? just curious

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Thanks littlem~~

littlem said:

i like version 1 and 3 the best.

but on version one, i'd love if her dress was the same color as the tee.

melmike
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version 3 definitely

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Right we can try that later.

By the way, how do you feel about the cat on shoulder?

littlem said:

also on version 1, i wonder how it would look if the umbrella was that really pale blue color? just curious

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Thanks melmike~!

melmike said:

version 3 definitely

cmasse

Agree, version 3.

littlem

i think the cat is adorable.

but i do love everything about version 3. ha. tough choices!

littlem

i think the tree branches are more sophisticated and fit better with the rest of the design.

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cmasse said:

Agree, version 3.

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Got it Sir :P

littlem said:

i think the cat is adorable.

but i do love everything about version 3. ha. tough choices!

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Bumpy

Kappy51

I like version one the best. Personal opinion. I love the little kitty. :3

I also agree that the girls dress should be the same color as the shirt.

~Kappy

KKimball318

This is cool! I think the moon should be in the style of either the city or the little girl; it looks a little out of place.

FightingFit

Love this, looks like an etching of old! I prefer version 1 but I'd echo earlier comments about the dress being pure black like the shirt. I'd like a little more colour in the girl and/or umbrella, it looks a little too pastel compared to neon colours of the top half. Love it though!

celandinestern
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this is so good!!!!!! I love no. 1. No 3. is great in the buildings part but the girl is too colorful in that one, for me.

Manupix

2 or 3.

Nice design! The city composition isn't all that great though: far too cluttered, weird perspective on the sideways buildings. You should emphasize vertical lines to blend the cityscape into rain better.

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Thank you for the critiques!! They are very helpful.

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I would especially thank you for your honesty Manupix, going to fic them :D

Manupix said:

2 or 3.

Nice design! The city composition isn't all that great though: far too cluttered, weird perspective on the sideways buildings. You should emphasize vertical lines to blend the cityscape into rain better.

rickyarianto

I like 1 and 3.. but 3 better... lol

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bumpy

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Thanks abby --!

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Bumpy

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soloyo
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love it!

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Aye Sir :P

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