Simpsons Challenge WIP - Would love some advice (UPDATE) :D
Hey everyone!! This is my first serious submission, and I would love to get some feedback :D The character on the left is baby Ralp Wiggum btw... he was shown getting dropped on his head as a baby in one episode xD
Also, any ideas for a funny/witty title to write in the banners would be much appreciated!! So far I've got "You came to the wrong neighbourhood" and "It's nap time" :P
This is my inked drawing... my scanner wasn't working yesterday so I just took a photo, so please excuse the bad quality!!
Ok I scanned my drawing onto my laptop and I've been working on my design all day, and this is what I've got so far! Any suggestions (eg. possible fonts?) would be great :D
As Maggie says at the end of her speech to the other babies, "And now, if the court will allow me, it's nap time"
Which do you think is better?? Or do you have any better ideas? If so, please share them :)
After asking my friends and receiving feedback from you awesome people, I've decided to run with the "It's nap time" idea as it turned out to be the most popular. I also improved the banner as Pyne so kindly suggested :D Now I just need to know.... highlights or no highlights?? Which is better? And are there any other improvements I could make??