Help me! Critique my design, please

My design was declined because idea needs to be worked on. Would love some help to make this a better design, because I believe in it <3

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I'm a bit surprised this didn't go through; typically it's pretty obvious why. The only thing I can really think of (for this particular design at least) is maybe to add some color. I don't really dabble in this kinda work though. Just a thought...

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Should be up now - I meant to decline it because it was a duplicate submission but accidentally declined both.


OH! Thank you, Jeffrey!

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