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Hey guys, I just finished this design. I would love some feedback. I think it is cool, but also there are some things that can be better. Just can figure out which things ^^
It's a great concept. I liked the execution of cookies but I would change the feet to have flat bottoms. A boxing ring background could help also. I'm not sure about the speech bubble.
I like the idea of the text but I think more expressive font and cleaner speech bubble is in order. Either that or a much more jagged, over the top speech bubble. Also I agree; I think just the right amount of boxing ring detail would really make this shine. Good luck!
It's cool but typographie and speech bubble need some work and :
altair4444 said:... A boxing ring background could help also..
... A boxing ring background could help also..
Thank you very much for the awesome feedback! I will get to work right away ^^
The characters are good but I would redraw the shadows (make them one colour / halftone) and add a boxing ring. It's weird, my boyfriend just came up with this concept yesterday but you beat him to the punch :D
Agree with ^Akaka improve shadows.
Thanks a lot for the feedback guys. I also think that with a ring it looks better. Here is what it turned out. I am planning to put it up for voting soon ^^
I like the concept! The speech bubble looks a little awkward to me.
Also, there are a couple of stray lines on the left post that make it look a lil naughty ;)
OMG! IT'S RAY BISCUITERIO!!! Hahaha I love this idea, nicely done! Although I agree that both the speech bubble and font could be improved... still looking good :)