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Critiques needed to help my submission.

I submitted this image last week for a a t-shirt design, and it got rejected. So I'm here to get some feed back and suggestions to improve it to a point that I hope will allow it to pass submission. All ideas are welcome, but obviously I'll have to decide which I take to heart and which don't jive with me.

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Worrellwide

Hey man!

The line work is really smooth! I like the cleanliness of it! But it's a little hard to tell what is going on, maybe try to clean it up? Make it have more repetition?

Keep it up! Worrellwide

Lucio Spizzirri

I could add some more repetition in a few places for sure. Though I'm not too sure what you mean by cleaning it up, could you elaborate on that a bit if possible?

Ashleighdz
Lucio Spizzirri said:

I could add some more repetition in a few places for sure. Though I'm not too sure what you mean by cleaning it up, could you elaborate on that a bit if possible?

I think worrelwide meant "clean it up" as make a bit less busy. Also, i think add some color (if you want) and make it about one topic not too mant things happening at once.

maneight

hai, what is ? abstract? i don't understand . please tell me about this!!

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