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collab with osaze. . text message in a bottle WIP. Suggestions Please!!

What's up peeps.. working on a collab with osaze let us know what you think?


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soloyo
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Is that a phone inside the bottle? I like the second version better, just because the bottle has a cork on it, which makes more sense to me

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great idea! can't wait to see it develop more. I also like the second one more.

goliath72
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We were thinking of maybe like a regular message in a bottle floating

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Any suggestions? !

soloyo
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do you mean a regular text message or a regular paper message??

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Ha ha brilliant, i really like the first one because he looks distressed, Maybe change the phone to a blackberry style phone with a keypad. Overall though this is a great concept :-)

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Still a text messsge on he phome, but where its floating no wster going in but the battery showing the phine is dying lol Houghts?

soloyo said:

do you mean a regular text message or a regular paper message??

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Thanks more please

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my first thought was to turn it around - a surprised smartphone getting a bottle with a message from it's screen (which could be little overflowing or splashing pixels around) :) in your scenario I guess the message will make it work - SOS seems a little too obvious in here IMO

osaze

just got this idea now(rough sketch)

chuck p comics
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osaze said:

just got this idea now(rough sketch)

this is a great concept and you guys are gonna do great, but i dont think you should do this last version because the swordfish takes away from the main concept, the sketch were the cork is busted and letting in water is the best one!

osaze

what you say is very true chuck,but i guess i was just thinking of a catalyst that made the cork to be removed. it seemed somehow weird to me just leaving the half cork

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Great addition but I agree with chuck

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osaze said:

what you say is very true chuck,but i guess i was just thinking of a catalyst that made the cork to be removed. it seemed somehow weird to me just leaving the half cork

well maybe just a crack it the bottle letting in water, or forget the water and just show him siting in there all board!

osaze

how about i add the other half of the cork on the floor, then make the 3 fishes at the background all silhouettes of sword fishes

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