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Splashsquatch final score 3.13, Two WIP

Thanks sooo much for the help you guys!! And a special thanks to moosabman (Jordan) for the title!


Here's the link you would like to score Splashsquatch.


Also I have a new WIP ready to sub..unless you have anymore input..


Thanks again!!


Splashsquatch
Final score: 3.13
390 votes with 78 fives and 77 ones.
Thanks to those that voted!!


Good Whale Hunting
WIP...possible final draft.




Rough draft. Been done?

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macdoodle
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I'm almost at the finish point on this. I have yet to add splashy type details to show that he's walking in water. If anyone has any suggestions or edits that would be cool.

It's supposed to be a squatch taking a stroll in the river while trying to keep his shoes dry.

Twiggyhall
BeanePod said:

needs more butt

this could be said for almost every sub...

but I like what you're doing here, Mr. McDoods :)

macdoodle
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Twiggyhall said:
BeanePod said:

needs more butt

this could be said for almost every sub...

but I like what you're doing here, Mr. McDoods :)

Its good advice for every day life also. Butt makes things better.

Also...thanks. ;)

mip1980
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I don't normally like these designs where the shirt is used as an outline for a centered image ( there are far too many up for voting) BUT i do find yours strangely hypnotic :-) Would the character look more involved with the scene if he was white and grey instead of charcoal? I would love to see an example of white to see how it affects the palette :-)

Great work so far!!!!

dnice25
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I would use a lighter color for his face and legs, like a light brown or tan. It looks really good though

macdoodle
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mip1980 said:

I don't normally like these designs where the shirt is used as an outline for a centered image ( there are far too many up for voting) BUT i do find yours strangely hypnotic :-) Would the character look more involved with the scene if he was white and grey instead of charcoal? I would love to see an example of white to see how it affects the palette :-)

Great work so far!!!!

Thanks guys. Here's a white and grey version for comparison.

TheArtistDude

I like this design but maybe changing the bottom of both shoes to white instead of leaving one white and one a whole solid color.

macdoodle
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Sweet, thanks! I'll keep on tweaking it and post progress as I go. Any other thoughts will also be considered.

macdoodle
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TheArtistDude said:

I like this design but maybe changing the bottom of both shoes to white instead of leaving one white and one a whole solid color.

Oops! I'll fix that. Good catch.

mip1980
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What about changing the tee colour to a dark blue, the black contrast is very sharp, this image is looking so so good!!!!!!

hobigambar

Love the idea, looks a bit stiff to me.

macdoodle
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Added some water details...and fixed the shoe.

macdoodle
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Hmmm...too similar? Maybe I should stick with darker fur?

JLBradford

This is great. All of your revisions are dead on. Love the water splashing around his foot. I also love the tone on tone background. Really holds attention.

I think you're in good shape. I'd just make it smaller on the shirt - I think we're looking at him from inside a cave, yes? I think making it smaller will give a better sense that there are some elements closing in around the scene and we're hidden from him.

I'd also give him just a little more room between his head and the frame.

JLBradford

No, I think stick with white fur. At first I thought you should darken up his skin, but I think everything being lighter unites it as a scene and separates it from the shirt color. I think that's what holds attention so well.

macdoodle
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Great notes. Thanks!!

Twiggyhall
macdoodle said:

Hmmm...too similar? Maybe I should stick with darker fur?

Oh no no no was just giving you a yeti thumbs up :)

macdoodle
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Awwwww :)

macdoodle
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I added a brow and a beard. Does it help or hurt or no difference? Thanks!!

macdoodle
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...also, any name suggestions welcome :)

moosabman
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Splashsquatch

Twiggyhall
moosabman said:

Splashsquatch

LIKE

macdoodle
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Twiggyhall said:
moosabman said:

Splashsquatch

LIKE

HAHA! Me likey!

moosabman
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Haha, awesome you used it! Well there is an insta 5 from me right off the bat ;)

macdoodle
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Of course I used it! Perfect name for it! Thanks again :)

macdoodle
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BeanePod said:

Yes to SPLASHSQUATCH!

Splashsquatch 4eva!!

macdoodle
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Now scoring! Thanks for checking it out :)

macdoodle
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Still working this one up. If you have any suggestions, that would be great!!

Twiggyhall

omg that is AWESOME!!

loving all the bananer subs lately :)

macdoodle
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It has been banana central round here! The new cats of Threadless perhaps?

Also, thanks!! :D

Twiggyhall

can butts be far behind???

get it????? BEHIND!!!!

hahahahahahahaha I crack myself up!

get it????? CRACK!!!!

ok I'm leaving now....

macdoodle
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Twiggyhall said:

can butts be far behind???

get it????? BEHIND!!!!

hahahahahahahaha I crack myself up!

get it????? CRACK!!!!

ok I'm leaving now....

You cheeky monkey :P

macdoodle
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Made a few changes. Changed the monkey faces and positioning, added some half toning to the banana, changed the water up some. Just chipping away until I like it :)

Twiggyhall
macdoodle said:
Twiggyhall said:

can butts be far behind???

get it????? BEHIND!!!!

hahahahahahahaha I crack myself up!

get it????? CRACK!!!!

ok I'm leaving now....

You cheeky monkey :P

hahahaha well-played...

also, looking good :) like the changes

macdoodle
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BeanePod said:

OMFG....THAT'S ONE WHALE OF A NANNER!

size matters

BeanePod said:

Should one of em be wearing a captains hat?

Great idea! I'll give it a go.
BeanePod said:

Also, I'd be amazed if that didn't print.

Your flattery flatters me ;))

macdoodle
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now with 75% more hats :)

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