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Please critique! Honeywheat Moon?

Hey guys! Been working on this design on and off for a while and I wanted your input if you like it and what I can improve. Any input is welcome


If you can think of a name that would be great as well. I'm thinking, Honeywheat Moon?


Thanks!


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Dylon51

The concept is great , its out there, but very solid. I also like the silhouette of the bed not taking away from the main focus of the design. As far as names go, I'll just throw some out there: "Bread Tie The Knot", "Love Mayonnaise" "Bread Bed" "Love Loaf" "Consummate that Croissant" and anything to do with a yeast infection. Cheers!

taz-pie

I don't get what your concept is at all.

taz-pie

2 really ugly loaves of bread(?) about to have sex(?) on a giant's bed(?) WHY

Wolfgang8885

Bump for constructive criticism

KJayz

Haha, this is hilarious! Love it!

Wolfgang8885

Thanks! Still working on it though. Needs some more work.

FoodStampDavis
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Add a design on the back of the shirt where we get to see the bread fuck.

Wolfgang8885
foodstampdavis said:

Add a design on the back of the shirt where we get to see the bread fuck.

LOL

evyc

It made me lol. But I'm not sure this would sell well.

BeanePod
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It's all fun and games until someone gets a yeast infection.

Sorry, my titles are always too long ;)

evyc

The Honeywheat's on their honeymoon

Wolfgang8885
BeanePod said:

It's all fun and games until someone gets a yeast infection.

Sorry, my titles are always too long ;)

Hahaha!

Wolfgang8885
evyc said:

The Honeywheat's on their honeymoon

I like that.

CoinSlotComics

I really like the concept and you did a good job with it. I would suggest adding more lace or frills to the veil to make it more obvious. Great job though and I look forward to when you submit this.

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