Tips or suggestions 4 DOC?

Hi guys! This is an artwork declined by headquarted of T. My "idea could use a little more work to be up to the standard that will give it the best shot."
Any suggestion? Just because I've seen a lot of tees wrost than mine - in my opinion, obviously - up for scoring...

Watch this

And here a close up to the picture:


I've learned that Threadless doesn't really like word balloons. I put some in my Fantastic Four Submission and they had me take them out. Maybe play with the font by itself without the balloon. Maybe make the head a little bigger.


Tanx dude. Mayby the words GREAT SCOTT who make a big black silhouette of Scott Pilgrim behind Doc?


U think it could works like this?

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