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Critique -- Papa Razzi | Tag Apparel

I just finished and posted this design last night. But the typical artist in me feels like something is missing, or something could be improved. And maybe a pair of fresh eyes could help. Any suggestions? Good or bad?


Thank you in advance. :)


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What_eVer_Luk
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Really cool design. Mayby try to use the instagram colors for the camer, maybe ba idea… Mayby put a second Smurf who's still looking to the cat, or taking pictures too. Finally for the t-shirt color, mayby try green or something else becaus the red from the Smurf, the cat and the bacground are pretty close.

Anyway these are just idea, hope it helps ^^

By the way can you vote for my designs? ^^ http://thrdl.es/~/J8J and http://thrdl.es/~/JAZ thx

What_eVer_Luk
What_eVer_Luk profile pic Alumni

Really cool design. Mayby try to use the instagram colors for the camer, maybe ba idea… Mayby put a second Smurf who's still looking to the cat, or taking pictures too. Finally for the t-shirt color, mayby try green or something else becaus the red from the Smurf, the cat and the bacground are pretty close.

Anyway these are just idea, hope it helps ^^

By the way can you vote for my designs? ^^ http://thrdl.es/~/J8J and http://thrdl.es/~/JAZ thx

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Thanks for the suggestions, I was attempting to limit myself to 7 colors so making it an instagram spoof won't work for me. And if I add another smurf it would defeat the overall pun of Papa smurf.. being a paparazzi. I do respect your opinion about the T-shirt color, the only reason its the color it is right now was in order to match that 7 color quota I used the t-shirt color as a shadow for the red. I'll try a green background. Ty.

oxworth

Great idea. The only thing I might change is removing the "x" from the cat. I feel as though most people would understand its meaning without it and it feels as though it makes the illustration more vulgar than it has to be.

MRRhoades

Looks great, love the design and story. Dont really have any critiques, I personally like the "X" haha. I'm worried about the details of the photos getting lost in print, but people will get the idea. Good work!

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Oxworth: Thank you for the feedback, I can see how the "x" can provide a bit of vulgarity and how some people might be offended by it. But this is what my story depicts, as paparazzi normally catch celebrities at their worst and these days most when they're baring it all. And MRRhoades: Thank you for your feedback as well. I glad you are pro "x" lol, I do appreciate the suggestion about the photos and possibility of them getting lost via print. I didn't even think about that. Perhaps I'll make another version with the Smurf larger, whereas the pictures will be depicted bigger and the cat is smaller in the background. Ty. :)

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Taking both of your suggestions to heart I created a separate T-shirt that appeals to both of your suggestions that I posted on my RedBubble account. :)

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