Critique Please? Working on a shirt submission.
Hello, all. My first submission didn't work out as I'd hoped, so I'm trying to come up with new ideas. Best thing I currently have is this image. It's proved to be extremely popular as a print, so I'm hoping it will be equally popular as a (potential) shirt.
I did two variations on this design-- one that kept the all-black lines of the original painting, and one where I colored the lines around the rocket glow to make it a little more vibrant. I honestly can't decide which of them I like best or which would be better as a shirt.
Thoughts? The line color is my main question but I'd appreciate any ideas on the design in general.