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soloyo
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????

speakerine
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the suspense is killing you I know.. ahah

NCowick

X-Acto Knives !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ignzed

Having now seen this, I anticipate only awesome...

soloyo
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I want to see it already

Theo86
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this is surely gonna be awesome!

celandinestern
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my suspense levels are going through the roof!!!

jerbing33
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this is gonna be awesome! (somebody has to beat that murrymullet) LOL

Manupix

Can't wait!

uglyducknyc

ah, the anticipation....

opippi
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sweeeeet

Stile

This is gonna be sick!

soloyo
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Stories come to life

soloyo
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what's no to like?

uglyducknyc

This is really cool.

After looking closely at it, the back carriage wheel just barely overlapping the book bothers me. I would make it clearly overlap or not at all.

Title suggestions:

Book of Wonders Words take Flight

speakerine
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thanks for the advices ! You're right about the carriage.. I love your titles! thanks

digsy
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so awesome, i like Words take Flight as a title

uglyducknyc

a bit of perspective to some of the cut-outs could be nice.

celandinestern
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Words take Flight is a great title. Also the piece is beyond amazing!!!! I feel it needs some tiny bit extra though. Could there be some very subtle swooshing effects to make it feel like those items are sort of flying out of the book rather than just floating above it? Maybe? Some additional slight shadows behind them? don't know what, but it needs just that tiny little pinch extra.

But so beautiful and creative!!!!!

speakerine
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you mean some blur, like on the third picture?

celandinestern
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also I agree on perspective, it would be great to see them floating in different directions slightly, and not all facing straight forward.

speakerine
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ok thanks I'll do something to increase the perspective

the smooshing effect could be cool but I'm always afraid this effect add a cheap effect, we'll see.. thank you cela & uglyduck for your big last support

celandinestern
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you're right, swooshing could end up looking cheap. But maybe it would be enough to just change the perspectives of things a bit. Like in the last photo where that ladder is dangling sort of off to the side, if they were all slightly like that - well some of them at least. To give more of a feel that they're in a three-dimensional space.

can't wait to see the final result :))))

uglyducknyc

Agree, I wasn't thinking of swooshing out of the book (because that would require a ton of special effects to look real).

I'm thinking more like a child's mobile above a crib or the objects in Regan's room in The Exorcist — but not too much perspective — just some subtle rotation on the larger objects to give a feeling that they're naturally floating in the air.

This is going to be great :-)

speakerine
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thanks! will work on it tomorrow!!

Manz76

"Words take Flight" is a cool title but I think it's more suited to the sub if all the cut-outs where birds. imo. This makes me think of the saying "a picture speaks a thousand words." But that's a wordy title! haha.

Looks terrific!! Looking forward to seeing it subbed.

eQuivalent
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great work!

speakerine
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updated! new perspective effect on the book + on the flying items..

EZFL
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ANOTHER PRINT

You've been killing it with concept/execution for a while now.

micheleficeli

That's great! I'd try add something that connect the magic of the objects flying and the book... you know, some abstract shapes, smoke, or something else... not sure it could be better,tho.

celandinestern
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I think it's just fantastic.

speakerine
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thank you !! new version:

speakerine
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I'll sub it soon. Thanks again for your help.. You're so nice...

celandinestern
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I kinda like the dust :) it's subtle, and it gives them a more 'real' vibe.

coyote alert
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This is wonderful, I like the dust.

uglyducknyc

It softens the edges a little and adds a "magical" element, so I vote yes for the dust.

soloyo
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I love the dust

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