Read Between the Shapes

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This is an idea that I really liked and inspires me.


I'm wondering, should I change the letter color or should I change the letter size?

parallelish profile pic Alumni

if the slogan is going to be read between the lines, i think it would work better if you used a lot of different shapes close together so the negative space creates the letters


Awesome idea colors and coverage area! Not sure I like the typeface.


This is a great start, could you make the main title(the red one) bigger and the white bring down its contrast, so the main title pops out,

Kip it up

Arinesart profile pic Alumni

As parallelish said, I would go with a negative space creating the letters :)


Thanks guys! I'll try a combination of all your suggestions.


The word between is too hard to read also I would change the phrase to read between the lines instead

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Also if you could critique my design I'd really appreciate it. Thanks

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